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這是我的英文作文...錯的有點多...請幫我找出錯誤...謝謝!I agree that people never giving up and keep trying to achieve my goals. In my life had past twenty years, I failed in my important process that is high school exam and college school exam. At that time, I couldn’t see my future and cried all day. I don’t have any talent, I always... 顯示更多 這是我的英文作文...錯的有點多...請幫我找出錯誤...謝謝! I agree that people never giving up and keep trying to achieve my goals. In my life had past twenty years, I failed in my important process that is high school exam and college school exam. At that time, I couldn’t see my future and cried all day. I don’t have any talent, I always think if I am going to find jobs, what`s job could I find. My mom had high expectation for me, when I was a child, she let me to learn a lot of things to develop my habits but I was too lazy, everytime I always giving them up. But I have a dream that I hope to study abroad in the United States. Though now I am just a course credit class student not a formal college student, I don’t give up, I still study hard, and I want to be a formal student after the transfer exam this summer. I like to be a student, I like English, never give up is my assert because I believe that trying hard you would see the success. These two years, I never give up. Want my dream can achieve.

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I agree that people don't give up but keep trying to achieve their goals. I'm already twenty years old. I failed the high school, and college entrance examinations, which were both very important in my life. At that time, I couldn't see anything good in my future; therefore, i cried all day long. I'm not talented, so I always wonder about what kind of job I can get. My mother had had high expectation on me since i was a child. She let me learn a lot of things, in an effort to create and find out my interests. However, I was so stupid that I gave up all the time. I have a dream which is to study in the States. Although I attend course College of Contituing Education, not being a formal college student, I study very hard. I want to be a formal college student after the transfer exam this summer. I like being a student. In addition, I love English, and I'll never give it up, because I believe that I will succeed if I try hard. I won't give up these two years, for I want my dream to come true. 2006-04-15 00:26:38 補充: 我本身是五專畢業插大,要加油喔!考上真的是.........很爽!!當然我也 很enjoy當大學生的感覺....

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